A Punch in the Face

On August 30, a police officer from the Lawton Police Department punched a suspect in the face. The incident is being investigated. You can read the story here: https://www.kswo.com/2019/09/03/lpd-releases-police-report-punching-incident/

And you can read the police report here: https://www.lawtonok.gov/sites/default/files/publications/2019-09/PoliceReport_8302019.pdf

It is worth reading! The sentences are clear and professional. The officer writes in normal English – no jargon. Everything is straightforward: no opinions, no unnecessary repetition.

Here’s an excerpt:

I turned my attention to Porter. I immediately observed that he was sweating profusely, and breathing heavily. Porter began to flex his upper body at me, growl, and yell at me. I was able to see veins in Porters’ neck bulging and spit flying from his mouth as he growled.

It’s a pleasure to read such an excellent report. I hope you’ll take a moment to read it yourself.

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