Today we’re going to begin focusing on police jargon and confusing expressions you should avoid in report writing. There are two advantages to avoiding these words. First, you’ll sound more up-to-date and professional. Second, your reports will be more specific.
Here’s today’s list:
This clumsy word has two strikes against it. First, it’s archaic. Second, it doesn’t explain how you acquired the information. Better choices are “saw” or “heard.”
“Yes” works better.
At the present time
Use “now” instead–or just leave it out. There’s no difference between “He’s now awaiting trial” and “He’s awaiting trial.”
Baker Acted (as in “I Baker Acted him.”)
This is police jargon and out of place in a professional report. Substitute “I started Baker Act proceedings” or “I took her into custody under the provisions of the Baker Act.”
This is too vague for a professional report. In fact it could cause problems in court later on, if you forget exactly how you got in touch with the person. Be specific: I phoned her, I visited him, I emailed her, I taped a note on his office door.
Substitute “hurry” or “speed up.”
If and when
Substitute “if,” which covers both words.
In close proximity to
In order to